Earlier this week I gave a talk at the New York Society Library on publishing. It was aimed primarily at writers of long form fiction and nonfiction. I had a great time giving it, and those in attendance seemed to enjoy it as well which was very gratifying. As an editor I see aspiring authors make fatal mistakes everyday so I thought I’d share what I’ve pieced together here with fellow writers. Keep in mind this is truly a basic overview. If you have suggestions/additions or outright disagreements with any of the points please share.
Caveat 1 – Everything you’ll read here is my opinion. There are no absolutes in publishing. Anything truly is possible, but the reality is 99.9% of the time things happen in a fairly predictable way. By understanding the basics you’ll improve your odds of getting published.
Caveat 2 – My background is in trade or commercial publishing. That means getting paid to write. And that means understanding and accepting that writing is also a business, and if you’re going to succeed you need to be both author and business person.
1. Finish Your Book. Very few books are sold based on an outline, especially novels.
2. Start The Next Book. As soon as you’ve finished your first book, celebrate by starting the next one.
3. Entertainment. Keep in mind that unless you’re writing tax code, and perhaps even if you are, your book should entertain. No matter if it’s fiction or nonfiction, you only succeed if you interest readers, and that means engaging them with your prose.
4. Communication. Your goal is to tell a story so that people understand it. Incomprehensible genius will lose to something relatable and readable every time.
5. Synopsis – Prepare a two sentence synopsis of your book along with a page outline. In essence, be prepared to provide a little, or a lot, of information. Practice describing your book in short, declarative sentences. Pretend you’re writing a 30 second commercial.
6. Query Letter. Short and sweet is always best.
7. Follow Directions. Whether you are contacting an agent of an editor, one who excepts slush, follow directions. If someone says email me an outline and one chapter, don’t send them the entire ms.
8. Grammar. If you do correspond by email please use proper grammar.
9. Backup. If you send anything by regular mail, always keep a backup copy at home. And always use white paper and black ink. Double-space any manuscript pages. Use a standard font and size such as Courier or Times New Roman in 12pt.
10. Author Bio. Prepare a short and long biography. Focus on what will make you interesting, especially as it pertains to the book you’ve written. If you’re a police officer and you’ve written a police procedural, make sure to include that. If you’re not a police office and you’ve written a police procedural, come up with a bio that explains your decision and why your book will be as good or better than one written by a cop.
11. Oprah. Just don’t. Avoid referencing Oprah in any way. Don’t say her name, don’t write her name, don’t even think her name. The same goes for the NYT Book Review, any television show, and any big name author.
12. Comparison. Don’t say your book is like The DaVinci Code, or Harry Potter, or Stephen King etc. Definitely don’t say it’s better. As soon as you do what you’ve really said is I have no idea how this business works. Now, if you know Oprah or your spouse works at the New York Times that’s another story, otherwise just stay away. Let the editor discover your brilliance. So, instead of saying “my novel is the next James Patterson” try “my novel is inspired in part by Patterson’s rigorous attention to small details, but then I go in this or that direction.” This way you’ve dropped a big name, but not in a way that appears self-aggrandizing…even though it is.
13. Movie Rights. The chances of a book being optioned, let alone picked up and made into a movie are so infinitesimal that you’d be better off putting your faith in lottery tickets…while being struck by lightning. So don’t mention them (but that doesn’t mean you should give them up if you’re offered a contract!)
14. Open Mind. Listen to advice, but don’t be a weather vane. Pay special attention to any advice you get from people who get paid to do what you want to do.
15. Write Everyday. Find the time. Like any skill writing needs to be exercised.
16. Be Prepared To Revise. That includes the title, the sex of the main character, perhaps even your conclusion. The key with any revision, however, is that you understand it and agree with it. Don’t revise, however, based on one or two casual reader comments.
17. Research. I’m talking in terms of getting published. For example, sending a history editor a romance or a mystery or a self-help book would be a waste of time. Sit down with a copy of LMP and Writer’s Market and find out which editors edit the kind of book you’re writing, and which agents represent authors writing those books. Stroll the aisles in the library and the bookstores. Check acknowledgements. See who published a book similar to yours. Be aware of what’s out there because your potential editor/agent will be. You don’t have to read every book by the competition, but you should have some idea who they are and what they do and most importantly, how you are different. Be able to define your book both by what it is and what it isn’t.
18. Promiscuity. Flirt with ideas. Try them on. Publishers aren’t looking for one book wonders unless it’s an exceptional memoir. They want an author who will produce year after year.
19. Be Prepared. Have your ducks in a row before you approach an editor or an agent. Editors make snap judgments, they have to. You have to be confident, but not overbearing. In other words, be a professional and you’ll be treated like one.
20. Don’t Mention The Following. Money, actors who would be perfect to play your character, Oprah, or what your friends thought.
21. Patience. If you’re serious that means you’re in this for the long run, so you need to approach it like a marathon runner and not a sprinter. Any book an editor buys today won’t likely be published for twelve months or more. Also understand that like any job, writing can be a grind. Dreams are fun, but making them a reality takes a lot of hard work…and often time.
22. Agent Exclusive. If an agent asks to see your ms exclusively that’s fine, but you in turn can and should stipulate a time limit.
23. No Fee. No reputable agent will charge you a fee upfront.
24. Experienced Agent vs. New Agent. There are pluses and minuses to both. An experienced agent will have a lot of clients which means you’ll likely be at the bottom rung of the ladder whereas you could be one of the biggest clients for a new agent.
25. Assistants Become Editors And Agents So Be Nice. Remember the twenty-something you talk to on the phone today could be buying manuscripts tomorrow. If you feel particularly frustrated one day (and in this business you will) instead of taking it out on an assistant channel that frustration into a character.
26. Small Publisher vs Large Publisher. The key, if you should be so fortunate as to have a choice, is to choose the publisher that is most excited and supportive of your book, and your career potential.
27. Marketing. You can make yourself a more attractive author by showing an understanding of marketing which in part means an understanding of the market. Know where you fit in the bookstore. Have ideas for your website (yes, in this day and age a website is pretty much standard).
28. Marketing II. Don’t become a marketing genius and then not have a quality product (your book) to promote. No amount of genius promotion will compensate for a lousy book. Word of mouth remains a huge factor in how people choose books to read.
I like the idea of being idea promiscuous 😉
Monogamy is so over-rated…idea-wise that is 🙂
Chris, you should post this or the link to it on the workshop mailing list. Give them some content to chew on. *g*
Or I could do it for you. Give you deniability and all that. I’m used to being a target over there. 😉
Not sure how to post it to the workshop. I’m still a bit technologically challenged. You’re referring to OWW right?
Yup, OWW. They still have the Yahoo group mailing lists, one for writing discussion and one for ‘chat’. This post would be perfect content for the writing mailing list.
Across the top of the workshop home page is a yellow toolbar and a button that says newsletter and e-groups. That will let you sign up for the mailing list. The all you have to do is write a brief intro and post the link to this LJ entry, or you can copy and past all the text you have here into a mailing list post.
Or as I said, I can post the link for you if you want to share this with the people at OWW. There are over 1500 people on the writing list.
Think 1500 potential new readers. 🙂
If you don’t mind posting that would great, thanks. I have a tendency to fowl those things up.
Consider it done. 🙂
From the OWW reading list
Thank you for posting the link to the ‘Orshop.
And thanks, Chris, for sharing your thoughts and experience.
Re: From the OWW reading list
Happy to help. I had to learn a lot of this stuff the hard way, but there’s no need for other writers to have to reinvent the wheel. These days there are any number of terrific resources out there to peel away the fog and make getting published easier.
From OWW too
Thanks for linking this to the OWW mail list, your list of comments make very good sense. I wondered if re no 12, it was all right to use lighter comparisons such as “The Sopranos meets Babylon 5” sort of thing? Or is this just as bad?
Re: From OWW too
Well, you’re comparing a novel to television. While it could help to orient the editor/agent (assuming they watch television and not all of us do – we’re big time readers after all) it could also signal that your influences are television and that’s probably not what you want. Keep in mind that if I haven’t watched both of those shows you’ve already lost me. As it happens I’m a huge Soprano’s fan, but know very little about Babylon 5, so I’m not sure what to make of the tagline. A better approach would be to break it down and be more specific. What about the Soprano’s have you emulated? Same with B5.
Myself, I’d find books to use as comparisons. I’d also make sure to check with the editor/agent in question and find out if they are looking for you to provide that snappy marketing tagline or not. Some seem to want it, others don’t. It’s always important to tailor your submission to the person you’re sending it to.
Re: From OWW too
Thanks Chris, very good sense again and pitfalls I had not even thought of. As I am from the UK there would be even more potential for confusion!
Stumbling onto your blog
My Google Alert sent me a link to your blog and it’s a thrill to meet a fellow novelist and runner. I’m currently in the third revision of my novel (also my MFA thesis) and plan to submit to agents in the summer.
Good luck with your writing!
Re: Stumbling onto your blog
Google Alerts are great. I use them all the time for my authors as a way to keep track when an op-ed gets published or a review goes up somewhere around the world. And, yes, I have one for my book, too.
Congratulations on both the writing and the running. For me they’ve become entwined and each compliments the other. Do you find that?
All the best with your novel!
Re: Stumbling onto your blog
There’s a tangible connection between running and writing. So many writers have been devoted runners. Joyce Carol Oates, for example.
For me, long runs offer an almost meditative state and stir good ideas. This weekend I almost forgot to stretch after a run because I needed to write everything down!
Happy to help.